SenorFartFace's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pananda Bread - Episode 1 - The Rap Battle]

Clearly a lot of effort and love went into this project. I enjoyed the animation, it fit nicely with the tone and style you were going for. I also thought that the character designs were distinctive and represented the characters well.
My main criticism for this animation is that the writing isn't that strong. The pacing of the story is slow and we spend the first four minutes without the story progressing at all. I understand that you were aiming for a "clerks"-esque sort of intro where we get to know the characters but I don't think it should be at the sacrifice of telling the story. It made it less like a complete story and more like a series of tangentially related sketches.
That being said, I enjoyed the animation style but I think that the writing is the major issue with this. If you were to strengthen up the writing/jokes I could definitely see this series gaining traction online.
Good luck and I look forward to seeing future videos.

JeffVitkun responds:

Thanks for your thoughtful response. I agree about the writing. I think there's a catch 22 in making a TV show. Until you've made one that you wrote, you won't know how to write one. Which means the first one you make and write is going to kind of suck.

I think this episode picks up a lot in the second half. But if I were going to write it again, I would write it differently.

The one thing I took solace in, is that all pilot episodes suck. And grading on that curve I felt like we could have sucked a lot worse. So I'm hoping our future episodes will suck less.

Thank you for watching and commenting.

[Drump Animated Anti-jokes]

I'm not a huge fan of game grumps but I really enjoyed your animation. I thought that you definitely have a realized style that you were aiming for and certainly achieved. Would have liked to see a few more inbetweens between actions but other than that I enjoyed it. Look forward to seeing more content from you in the future. :)

gamebrojimmy responds:

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you like it. In the future I will be doing original video's, but I need to get better at animating first, and I need to find people who would want to collaborate with me to create really cool content. but for now I will use gamegrumps as a means to practice and own my skills as an animator.

[Bear & Bunny Boo 2]

Goddamn, this was a work of art. Really funny, solid script, and beautifully animated. Music was kick-ass too. My only bit of criticism would be it didn't feel like a complete story. Other than that I loved it!

Speedo responds:

its tru, watchin it back id constantly feel "this is kind of all over the place" but im still proud of it WEEE

[Ten Amazing Facts About Me!]

This is really funny, dude. I look forward to seeing more stuff from you in the future.

urbfilms responds:

I definitely don't plan on stopping! Thank you, sir! Means a lot!

[Piccolo: Attorney at Law]

Goddamn, your animations are always top notch, dude. Good Job

Sexual-Lobster responds:

cheers.